Finished Custom Assualt Rifle

[nick3d]

Remember that this model is one which I have modeled myself "AND" it was designed by sKc_Chains (C) ;) and firstly modeled by WMHunterTLS (Martyn Ball).

Comment on stuff I may need to improve on, thank you :D

http://file041a.bebo.com/10/original/2008/05/16/17/5806390551a7751745771o.jpg

[SnaFuBAR]

Firstly, rendering.... look at this thread http://www.modacity.net/forums/showthread.php?t=9328

Secondly, modeling. That is a not a gun, it is a gun shaped box with two cylinders jammed in the front end. Go find modeling tutorials. I would link you to maya modeling tutorials, but I don't use maya, I use max. So go find tutorials. Google.com is your friend.

[Tweek]

i STILL smell duplicate accounts.

i'd flame the shit out of you, but im kinda speechless at this right now.

[MNC]

You really need some proper renders before people can begin to judge it properly.

[nick3d]

Well i've been practicing but im not getting very far, I may not be as
advanced as anyone else on here but im gettin there.
Iv watched a couple of those video tutorials, infact i'v watched one on http://www.3dbuzz.com which was on for 4 hours n ive been doing what ive learnt from that which is using multiple boxes for creating your model.
And no this isn't a duplicate account.

[SnaFuBAR]

ive been doing what ive learnt from that which is using multiple boxes for creating your model.
WAT

Plane modeling. Do that.

[nick3d]

Im no good at plane modeling because i dont understand on how you do it, I keep on thinking you get the outline and then extrude but that didnt work, and martyn has been tellin me in school 2 try it, but i thought because i had got so far with this i'd finish it before i start on planes
is the lighting better on this 1http://file041a.bebo.com/3/original/2008/05/16/18/5806390551a7752118730o.jpg

[Masterz1337]

There is nothing redeeming about that model tbh.

[nick3d]

ye well i just wanted some peoples opinions and thanks for commenting anyways

[Darkness]

Get THIS study it now! (http://www.moddb.com/tutorials/23868/beretta-9000-video-tutorial)
Then come back when its not a box I don't care how big the download is
(http://www.moddb.com/tutorials/23868/beretta-9000-video-tutorial)

[demonmaster3k]

Advice: stop making halo-based guns get a bunch of real guns, draw a concept and start modeling from that concept work. projects with the proper planning are usually more successful than those that were started on the spurr-of-the-moment.

it's an ok model for someone who has had only like a week's experience at modeling. as the others said, do try plane modeling it's more efficient and gives you far more options than box modeling.

[nick3d]

do you have to pay for it ????????

[nick3d]

thanks for the advice i thought that is how you do it lol
and i haven't got 3ds max i only got like 9 days left for the trial

[AAA]

looks like a mixture of a BR, AR, and the Spartan Laser. >_>........=/

[Pooky]

That 'gun' is ridiculous no matter how good or bad the model is. Not only is there room for only the tiniest of mags, that bayonet looks like you'd stand a fantastic chance of stabbing yourself in the stomach.

[nick3d]

yes i no lol i cudnt be bothered change it

[Heathen]

I am kinda forgiving usually but no.

[TeeKup]

Box modeling is BAD.

Start over, watch some tutorials. I'm sorry but that model is just not going to cut it. Wait, I'm not really sorry, that fails outright.

[kid908]

That 'gun' is ridiculous no matter how good or bad the model is. Not only is there room for only the tiniest of mags, that bayonet looks like you'd stand a fantastic chance of stabbing yourself in the stomach.

i can't see that tiny thing do any damage at all... at first i thought the picture was like squished together =\ also it would help if you give us a poly count too. where's the mag!? i can't find it in that picture!!!!! what does it use? a .1mm calibar?

[Heathen]

and a bayonet? Pfft.

[Lateksi]

I like the idea and some of the shapes on it, but yes it does look like a box.

[nick3d]

thanks and I had a go at doing it with polygons and it turned out to be really gud but then my computer crashed so lost it all so it's kinda buggered lol so im not gonna do that weapon no more

[Advancebo]

the magazine goes into the gun from the top

[teh lag]

thanks and I had a go at doing it with polygons and it turned out to be really gud but then my computer crashed so lost it all so it's kinda buggered lol so im not gonna do that weapon no more

What the hell, do you even know what you're talking about? Of course you made it with polygons, ALL MODELS ARE MADE FROM POLYGONS. Also, how the fuck do you spell "good" as "gud."

P.s. i dont wanna be a nerd no more

[nick3d]

What the fuck is peoples problem on this give it a rest will you and i ment using planes god every1 makes a mistake every once in a while

[SnaFuBAR]

You seem to be fluent in mistakes.

[nick3d]

i may be but if you go back and read what has been put you'll understand what i ment

[Apoc4lypse]

whats funny about this model to me is how poor of a gun it is, the model its self ain't bad, its just, not a gun... its, boxes, with stuff, and shapes... and stuff.

I agree study a weapon modeling tutorial, the models design for being a gun is way off I think, wrong design language. (my opinion, idk if its right).