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Advancebo
August 30th, 2008, 12:36 AM
Im Learning :lol::D:)

Well I am modeling the Assault Rifle that Chains designed. Was also made by Hunter. But this is my attempt at it. As I am practicing plane modeling. Please criticize the model and my modeling.

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc292/Advancebo/planeattempt.jpg

Updates coming soon

ICEE
August 30th, 2008, 12:43 AM
its kind of a goofy looking design. you might want to do something with a more recognizable style if your looking for criticism

jngrow
August 30th, 2008, 12:56 AM
^Yep.

Also, way too early to crit.

SnaFuBAR
August 30th, 2008, 12:57 AM
Start with this:

http://www.fpsbanana.com/tuts/332 beretta 9000 tutorial, and you'll actually learn.

Corndogman
August 30th, 2008, 10:52 AM
You even made a thread for it? Seriously man....

FRain
August 30th, 2008, 11:15 AM
I haven't watched the Beretta tutorial all the way (although I should >_>) but it really helps your modeling skills, and learn new tools you probably have never heard about before (cut, connect, etc). I still suck at modeling but I'm at least better at it.

tl;dr: watch the vid.

Bastinka
August 30th, 2008, 01:27 PM
Looks more like a spline then plane modeling, still too early to crit.

Chainsy
August 30th, 2008, 05:59 PM
God, why do people keep using a concept I made over a year ago that over all sucks and has no purpose what so ever?

Bastinka
August 30th, 2008, 06:10 PM
He's the only one I've seen attempt it, stop bragging to your imaginary fanboy crowd.

SnaFuBAR
August 30th, 2008, 07:29 PM
nick3d and someone else did it too.

Advancebo
August 31st, 2008, 11:17 PM
nick3d and someone else did it too.

nick3d, hunter, and i

Kalub
August 31st, 2008, 11:25 PM
Looks more like a spline then plane modeling, still too early to crit.

Uhh not even in the slightest especially since you can see every face because it isn't smooth.


He's the only one I've seen attempt it, stop bragging to your imaginary fanboy crowd.

How was he bragging when he was arguing against using it....




I love picking through threads

Advancebo
September 1st, 2008, 12:52 PM
anyways...

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc292/Advancebo/arrender2.jpg

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc292/Advancebo/arrender3.jpg

jngrow
September 1st, 2008, 06:51 PM
If you continue this way, it's going to end up looking really boxy.

Inferno
September 1st, 2008, 09:50 PM
If you continue this way, it's going to end up looking really boxy.


What do you mean by "end up" it already is.

I guess its ok though but like he said its waaaay to flat.

Hunter
September 2nd, 2008, 06:28 AM
Don't model that design. No offence to Chains but is a bad design and boxy. Use the Beretta 9000 tutorial.

Or a M4 Carbine, P90, M16 or something...

Advancebo
September 2nd, 2008, 06:49 AM
but i need a wireframe concept, instead of a concept thats colored in so i can see details

Hunter
September 2nd, 2008, 07:40 AM
I can see details and I don't use wireframes.

SnaFuBAR
September 2nd, 2008, 09:43 AM
no, you need high resolution refrence images, like the ones supplied in the tutorial i linked you to.