[WIP] Staples Hummvee

[staples]

still working on my modeling skills.. so i'd like some Constructive Crit.;)

http://i492.photobucket.com/albums/rr282/comneo/hummer1.jpg

EDIT: it's still missing stuff so it's a WIP(sorry for not adding that in the thread name).

[Heathen]

WAI too boxy.
Good for a start though.

[PenGuin1362]

First off, horribly boxy. Second, terribly inaccurate. Best thing to do is start over and get better reference images and get more the one.

If you're still fairly new to modeling i suggest trying this tutorial:
http://www.moddb.com/tutorials/beretta-9000-video-tutorial

[staples]

well i didn't let the model go to complete waste(hopefully);) so i had some fun with renders...

http://i492.photobucket.com/albums/rr282/comneo/hummer_clay.jpg
http://i492.photobucket.com/albums/rr282/comneo/hummer_clay2.jpg

EDIT: i know this model isn't that great and isn't done.. so if you see defects let me know.. lol such as one i just noticed which would be the back tires being all fuqed up.

[Apoc4lypse]

it would be decent if this was like the year 2000. Needs more polys, also the tires are too high poly.

I mean its presentable, but its missing a lot of detail.

Not to mention the hood and trunk look completely flat.

[Con]

Pay more attention to your references, it looks like you glance at it and go "oh yeah there's some thing there" and make some half-assed attempt at recreating it. Start over.