[WIP] Remington 870

[staples]

I made this fairly quick, and i'm new at modeling. still has alot more work needed, but hopefully a good start?

Problems: pump, stock, and to boxy.

http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo214/ben-jones5/shotgun1.jpg
http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo214/ben-jones5/shotgun2.jpg

[Bad Waffle]

You're forgetting wireframes, go pull out some real quick. You know the drill-straight from viewport shots, please

[SnaFuBAR]

Well I'll tell you right off the bat that the shape of everything is wrong. Start by looking at high res references (there's plenty, this shotty has been around for a long time) and breaking down each feature into basic shapes.

[Roostervier]

Do what snaf says. I'm not even that familiar with the gun and I can already tell the pump's shape is very off, and that the stock you have is pretty boxy.

[staples]

I'll get to work on those problems, and here are the wireframes.
http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo214/ben-jones5/wire2.jpg
http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo214/ben-jones5/wire2.jpg
http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo214/ben-jones5/wire3.jpg

[rossmum]

Delete every edge that isn't actually forming a shape.

[Corndogman]

I'd say you have too many segments in the back.

[Bad Waffle]

In all of those wireframes, you failed to show a simple overview of the entire gun. Just take the gun model and duplicate it, rotate it 180 degrees, lower it under the original gun, and render that.