[WIP] First character model

[kid908]

well i decided to make my first character model. i started today with the main body. most of the work is in the arm so here's the wip.

tutorial im following can be found at this site: http://www.arildwiro.com/

so far:
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/charwip1.jpg

anything wrong so far?

[Ki11a_FTW]

doesnt look to bad i suppose, skinny upper arm though

[teh lag]

Seems to be a bit of a dent in it.

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1796/dentbi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Could you post a wireframe?