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kid908
February 3rd, 2009, 10:59 PM
I lied. =P Just practicing some modeling techniques and need a ship design for animation class, and I thought i could kill 2 birds with 1 stone.

Pavallon class assault cruiser

No weapons platform have been added. I ixed semi organic, smooth and crude metal designs into 1 ship. Length, right now, should be around 1400m (I might change the size).

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/almostdonetop.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/Almostdonebottom.jpg
Jean-Luc
February 3rd, 2009, 11:00 PM
*whistles* Impressive.

Might we see a wireframe?
Kalub
February 4th, 2009, 12:04 AM
Looks like it needs something up front, could be just me though; like to offset it from just being a oval shape
SnaFuBAR
February 4th, 2009, 01:52 AM
Looks like a dick with veins.
jngrow
February 4th, 2009, 02:15 AM
Looks like a dick with veins.
I thought the exact same thing.
nick3d
February 4th, 2009, 05:22 PM
Looks like a dick with veins.

Thats a strange lookin dick, id be worried if yours looks like that
Malloy
February 4th, 2009, 05:25 PM
wow, I'm hating that hexagon engine thrusters/curved hull clash.
Con
February 5th, 2009, 01:50 AM
the odd organic shapes on the surfaces ruined it for me
Rob Oplawar
February 5th, 2009, 11:32 AM
Yeah. It looks like someone drizzled hot glue all over it or something.
Mass
February 5th, 2009, 01:45 PM
Looks like a dick with veins.
lol, yep.

Make those patterns sharp crevices between plates so they don't have that odd vein like look to them.
PenGuin1362
February 5th, 2009, 02:54 PM
It's a strong organic figure mixed with hexagonal shapes, does not flow well at all.

Also wireframe.
kid908
February 8th, 2009, 12:31 PM
LMAO i'll see what i can do about that. wireframes (not much right naow) poly cound is around 25k, in addition, i need help with a hyperdrive engine design =P

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/engines.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/wireframe1.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/wireframe2.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/wireframe3.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/wireframe4.jpg
Joshflighter
February 8th, 2009, 12:40 PM
Those engines are hot. :O
legionaire45
February 8th, 2009, 03:13 PM
Give the middle part some more detail. Maybe put some kind of rotating ring(s) area on it for gravity simulation (for the crew).
TeeKup
February 8th, 2009, 04:20 PM
Holy god at that empty space.
armoman92
February 8th, 2009, 04:45 PM
Looks like a dick with veins.


http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/1600/ptoeraseyc5.jpg
looks pretty similar too me

otherwise, i can't model as well as that so....
kid908
February 8th, 2009, 09:03 PM
Holy god at that empty space.

there a reason it has WIP in its name:p
SnaFuBAR
February 8th, 2009, 11:22 PM
the main body is medium resolution, and your engines and such are way higher resolution. I can't tell what the thing under the hull is even supposed to be. You need to do more than extrude polies of primitives.
kid908
February 14th, 2009, 09:11 AM
the main body is medium resolution, and your engines and such are way higher resolution. I can't tell what the thing under the hull is even supposed to be. You need to do more than extrude polies of primitives.
When you first learn to draw, they make you make primitive shapes to get a feel for the size of each object. I am just getting basic structure down, the same as making those circles and boxes for head and body, before making in depth details

Edit: OMFG i really hate that phrase.

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n211/kid908/bass.jpg
Let use this base for an example, you can break it down and say it is basic extrusion of primitives. It works because it has a design you know of; same thing with r2d2. I can break every model down into its primitive shape when looking at it. Hell, the biped modeling tut I’m following, all you do is extrude from primitive. You go back later and edit it to look like a person.

Saying that is like saying a sketch is nothing but lines or a painting as nothing more than colored oil splattered onto a canvases.
Rob Oplawar
February 14th, 2009, 05:04 PM
lol
SnaFuBAR
February 14th, 2009, 05:15 PM
Did you try to give me an art lesson just now? Did you really?
Corndogman
February 14th, 2009, 06:55 PM
Did you try to give me an art lesson just now? Did you really?

Cocky much?
mech
February 15th, 2009, 03:10 PM
I can break every model down into its primitive shape when looking at it. Hell, the biped modeling tut I’m following, all you do is extrude from primitive. You go back later and edit it to look like a person.


This info is gold.
SnaFuBAR
February 15th, 2009, 03:48 PM
Cocky much?
Yup. wAt up wit yah? U got eh problem bre?