[WIP] Render : The Library

[teh lag]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/3261/halo3fr6.jpg
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4941/halo2nh0.jpg

Comments and criticsim greatly appreciated, anything that would make it better.

And yes, I did get the idea of the coloring form Sin City.
Edit : Posted another version, not sure which is better.

[Emmzee]

Damn. That's awesome.

[Xetsuei]

MC doesn't bend his arms when holding/firing SMGs.

[Pooky]

Make the visor a different color. Otherwise, it looks great.

[BobtheGreatII]

It looks good except the visor (needs to be gold) and the muzzle flash looks....err....wrong. I'm not sure why just kinda does...

[Con]

I like the second one better. The green doesn't fit, but nor does the red visor. I think only the gun's fire should be colored, with a bit of reflected color on the floor. Another thing that stands out is the ugly low-res texture on the combat form. Just gross, you silly goose. Maybe add a "detail map" to the material to make it look more detailed?

[Leiukemia]

First one I like better for sure.

[Hurrvish]

second one, just change the visor colour + the muzzle flash

[legionaire45]

Color the visor gold, not red. Add some red/yellow blood splats to the floor.

[n00b1n8R]

did you make this in CE?
also, how did you do this? change to grey scale and up the contrast?

i hate the MC's stance, it looks fake. but i like the idea of the first better (the MC coloured against a bleak background) but the colour is to garish.

this was done in CE right? i might have a go later >.>
btw, does anybody know the dev comand to freeze time? (minor threadjack..)

[Stealth]

Wow, that looks cool, and is he holding two SMGs?

[Bodzilla]

looks great
I <3 Sin City

[rossmum]

Not really my style, reminds me of some of the SHEFs we get on Facepunch.

Alright, though.

[teh lag]

Thanks for all the input (and rep =o) guys. Unfortunately I can't work on it for the next few days, going away for a week. When I get back though, Ill resume work.

Oh, and for those wondering what the original 3ds render was.
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8798/sinhaloce1.jpg

[n00b1n8R]

it was just a render?

boooring V_V

[rossmum]

Why is it boring if it's 'just a render'?

[n00b1n8R]

i thought he made it in-game >:-/

[rossmum]

Why would it be any more exciting ingame?

[n00b1n8R]

because it uses less posing and more "that looks cool, i'll use that" in-game as opposed to that. that's basically Gmod. (though that's cool to)

anyways, back on topic, i may have a play with that image tommorow.

[Emmzee]

because it uses less posing and more "that looks cool, i'll use that" in-game as opposed to that. that's basically Gmod. (though that's cool to)

anyways, back on topic, i may have a play with that image tommorow.
No, Gmod is all about the posing.

[n00b1n8R]

yes, that's what he's done in that pic in max.
k?

[Chewy Gumball]

If you ever call max "basically gmod" again I will eat your cookies for the rest of your life.

[n00b1n8R]

WTF?

i didn't call max Gmod, i said what he's done (this posing) in max is basically what you do in Gmod. k? can you make models in Gmod? no, but that's not what he did.

ONTOPIC.