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Neuro Guro
April 21st, 2009, 04:02 AM
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SnaFuBAR
April 21st, 2009, 04:42 AM
Reminds me of a conversation Rob and I had about the nature of a fractal universe and infinitely infinite infinity.
Malloy
April 21st, 2009, 06:48 AM
too much time on hands topics ftw.
jngrow
April 22nd, 2009, 02:01 AM
Loved the movies paragraph.

A few moments you lost me, but overall it was a quick and pleasant read.
DOMINATOR
April 24th, 2009, 12:20 PM
sounds like stoner rambling.

dont got a problem with it though.