[WIP] Beretta M12's

[falconsfootball07]

Another update, last for today probably
http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_4.jpg

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_5.jpg

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Small update
http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_3.jpg

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_2-1.jpg

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This is my first model and post here in a LONG time
Some CC would be nice
I'm not really going for pc on this model, just trying to back back into things

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_1.jpg

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm280/BobbyRoos/beretta_m12_2.jpg

i was working on this automag before i stopped modeling and when i get back into the grove of things i'm gonna do it again
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b84/falconsfootball07/automag_render_4.jpg[/quote]

[PenGuin1362]

holy fuck where have you been. Seems alright so far, still kinda early though. The automag was coming along nicely

[falconsfootball07]

shit dude, it seems like i was the only who left haha
i've been real busy with school and just got back into it when i saw 3ds max on a school computer so i dug up my old install files

[legionaire45]

Maybe add an edge or two to the grip and surrounding area so that your grip is a bit rounder and nicer to hold.

Might want to tone down the push modifier a bit too :P

[falconsfootball07]

Maybe add an edge or two to the grip and surrounding area so that your grip is a bit rounder and nicer to hold.

Might want to tone down the push modifier a bit too :P
Thanks i was actually thinking about doing that
And the only modifier i use is symmetry, what does push do?

[Corndogman]

He was talking about the last image, with the wireframe cage over the model. Usually people duplicate the mesh and add a push modifier with a wire material to show the edges on top of the surface in a render.

[falconsfootball07]

oh ok, yeah i scaled it too much
i just tried the push modifier and it works alot better than scaling.
thank you!
and new update

[legionaire45]

Slightly nitpicky, but:

In future renders, can you zoom in on the weapon a bit more?
Render with something other than a clay render or darken it up a bit - it's hard to see any smoothing issues with the clay render
Triangulation above the trigger guard could be better
You could probably get away with adding more detail (edges) to the curves highlighted in red:
http://ultraxs.com/image-3E0E_4B1565F9.jpg