WIP[Memorial Sanctum]

[killer9856]

EDIT: EFFFF wrong word. Gravidity means pregnancy >_<. Its Memorial Sanctum

So yeah, I have become really devoted to this map. Its like a shrine almost. Still lots of work, but I need YOU!!!

To tell me whats wrong.

Time for pics :neckbeard:

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/STUPIFYRAHH.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/CRASHCRASHBURNNNN.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/AMIHIGHPERHAPS.jpg

[Bastinka]

Very nice on the natural walls and crumbled stairs! The ground seems pretty nice. Though the geometry of the structures seems kind of varying in styles. What exactly are you going for here? Or is it just making it up as you go along?

Keep it up.

[killer9856]

Its kind of old stone temple sanctum made with marble and stone.

[PlasbianX]

I think the geometry on the walls looks way too simplistic. I also think you could use more variation in the terrain.

[Dwood]

wireframe pl0x

[teh lag]

I'm really liking those structures. The design looks pretty nice at first glance and this could come out looking pretty good.

However,

http://tehlag.modacity.net/one/pix/crit1.png
http://tehlag.modacity.net/one/pix/crit3.png
http://tehlag.modacity.net/one/pix/crit2.png

A lot of your terrain geometry looks ghastly. I know it can be hard to sort out once you're this far into the process, but please please PLEASE clean those places up. They either look messy, unnatural, or just plain strange. In general your cliffs have the above-mentioned "almost-but-not-quite" look to them. Some places are fine and some are abominations.

[Reaper Man]

Fixed the title for you. >_>

[killer9856]

Thanks a bunch reaper, and lag, thanks for the crit. Im going to fix up the terrain later on tonight.

[Higuy]

Cool map man. The ingame test looked cool. Can't wait to play it again and and see more pics :-3

[bobsam]

EDIT: EFFFF wrong word. Gravidity means pregnancy >_<. Its Memorial Sanctum

So yeah, I have become really devoted to this map. Its like a shrine almost. Still lots of work, but I need YOU!!!

To tell me whats wrong.

Time for pics :neckbeard:

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/STUPIFYRAHH.jpg




The big building in the upper right had corner doesn't seem... ermmm... "Delta Halo" like... It just does not seem right...

[Higuy]

The big building in the upper right had corner doesn't seem... ermmm... "Delta Halo" like... It just does not seem right...
Who ever said it was Delta Halo?

[killer9856]

Yeah, this was something I kind of did off the top of my head.

[killer9856]

Update! After like a month and a half =|

I got the stuff ingame, learning terrain portals just today. There are some issues still, but they will be fixed in the upcoming weekend.

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/3.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/2.jpg

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/1-1.jpg


http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s15/SAH1R/4.jpg

The tree in the back is still being worked on. If someone can help give some tips for modeling trees, Ill +rep you.

[Inferno]

The big wall and water is pretty gross looking. Other than that it's looking decent.

[killer9856]

hmmm Ill fix the water. For the wall, I might change it into like an Archway bridge, something like this http://images.travelpod.com/users/zento/eandl2006.1175884140.img_1688_2339.jpg

Because I didn't like the wall to being with, but thats gonna get swapped for pretty stuff

[bobsam]

Well It just seemed Delta Halo "Like" Sorry I didn't know it wasn't supposed be Delta Halo.

[sleepy1212]

waterfall is bleh... it's flat...give it some shape.

[Dwood]

UVW that map and then retry the textures.

[Con]

If you have time, you should modify my ground texture in the sky so you have a beach around the lake and sand/mud underwater.

[Geo]

The model looks great, besides the few errors and not-so-hot areas that teh lag pointed out.
I also think that your cliff geometry should extend more into the background. The way they stop suddenly in the sky with those sharp edges is pretty unappealing.

Try giving the whole atmosphere of the map more character by extending the map with some non-play area terrain, which will make it blend more with the sky you chose. At the moment it looks just like what it is, a sealed off geometry floating in the sky.

Other than that, this looks great :) Keep up the good work

[killer9856]

Alright Con, Ill try that out.

And geo, Il go ahead with your crit.