MY BROTHERS RAP

[Bodzilla]

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he surprised me with htis just a minute ago, he's been playign around with rap for a few months now mostly as a joke but he recorded this.

it's freestyle


i reckon it's pretty good :O
any opinions?

[SiriusTexra]

Well, the collar isn't popped, and the black and white could use a little more grain. The tie is a little stern and the hair could allways be more wow but all in all it's pretty AMAZING.


Seriously though, Whole thing kinda made me feel awkward watching it here. I found myself turning the sound down really low so as no one would think I was actually enjoying this. That's my issue though.

In all respect to Aiden, who is as cool as the next guy, it's not happening for me. I'd offer criticism but I assume that since he was doing this out of being a joke there's no real serious context to the approach of this "musical creation" and I can't really take this seriously. The filming of it, the on off seriousness of it, the type of music it is, I get the major cringe factor on my end.

If he's thinking of being serious about it, in all respect, lose the act and take a more structural and meaningful approach and lose the middle of the road generic douche vibe that eminates from it. Maybe it's because I know Aiden and I've come into contact with him IRL. It just seems wierd as shit to me watching this and i do not like. Don't get me wrong, elements individually are decent, not sure wether it's worthy of internetting but it just seems like a massive ego plug, and that's the point of this I don't like.

But thats me. I am pretty defensive when it comes to musical quality, and not really forgiving most of the time. I don't think theres any place for mediocrity in this world, unless it's intended and meant to be that way for some sort of comedic purpose. Otherwise, just don't bother posting unless it's actually good and not just for self promotion and dick inflation purposes.

No personal disrespect to you or Aiden in this, you should know that. I'm just ripping on his creative intent, which is what is being discussed here.

[Bodzilla]

your thinking it as music, this was just a random track shit that he found somewhere to freestyle too lol.

thats all it is.

but he can do it is the main thing, just sorta took me by surprise.

[SiriusTexra]

Though so.

Is very surprising totally, and he should def go for it if he enjoys doing it.



Just make sure you listen to good rap Aiden :gonk:

[mech]

Your brother is a better artist than most in this area that take it seriously, and he's just playing around. The rap beat is generic, but it works. Can't really say I'm a fan of most new era rap though.

[Hunter]

:O He is pretty damn good.

[Con]

terms of use violation?

[Donut]

yeah wtf^

[Bodzilla]

what the fuck.

[Rook]

lol

[SiriusTexra]

I guess someone at youtube really didn't like the song xD