simple forerunner attempt

[kid908]

this is just an attempt at a forerunner style archietecture. it's supose to be longer, but i got lazy and this is good enough to give an idea. any idea how to improve it?
http://static1.filefront.com/images/personal/k/kid908/66403/hxhawimtzf.jpg

[Sever]

but i got lazy
There's your issue.

[Gwunty]

There's your issue.
Exactly I would recommend giving more thought into it and, before doing your own strucutre to try to replicate one from halo 3. This way you can get a feel for forerunner and, when you go off to make your custom model you will make one that looks amazing. But then again im no expert :p lets wait for one of the modeling gods to come.

[Pooky]

Exactly I would recommend giving more thought into it and, before doing your own strucutre to try to replicate one from halo 3. This way you can get a feel for forerunner and, when you go off to make your custom model you will make one that looks amazing. But then again im no expert :p lets wait for one of the forerunner architecture gods to come.

ftfy

[ICEE]

Seems like theres to many ridges to me. Also, the slopes generally seem to be longer in forerunner structures

[kid908]

Exactly I would recommend giving more thought into it and, before doing your own strucutre to try to replicate one from halo 3. This way you can get a feel for forerunner and, when you go off to make your custom model you will make one that looks amazing. But then again im no expert :p lets wait for one of the modeling gods to come.

=P i have made existing forerunner structure. when i said i got lazy i mean like making it in length not details this is valhalla base before released with limited resources.
http://static1.filefront.com/images/personal/k/kid908/66403/uwwfslqucu.jpg

[Gwunty]

Im also pretty shure (not completely though) that forerunner stuff dose not use smoothing. And that base is out of proportion.

[Heathen]

it's supose to be longer


:D

[Sel]

In the picture on the top, make those bars on the underside of the top less close together, I dont like how they look right now.

And chamfer some of those things on the front.

Otherwise its a good start.

[teh lag]

=P i have made existing forerunner structure. when i said i got lazy i mean like making it in length not details this is valhalla base before released with limited resources.

http://static1.filefront.com/images/personal/k/kid908/66403/uwwfslqucu.jpg

Jesus Christ, use [shot] tags on your images.


Also,

but i got lazy

If you aren't willing to put effort into your work, don't expect people to put effort into helping you.

[Disaster]

^ Also, looks top heavy

[kid908]

when i said i got lazy i mean in length(a repeated pattern). and i think what i showed is good enough to give an idea where im heading in forerunner design.