[COMPLETE] Comic Style

[fatso784]

I did something a little different this time around; I actually took the time to lineart the sketch (I'm incredibly lazy..) I just did random crap in the background, but it turned out looking pretty good. This is a take on American comic style, instead of my normal anime-strict diet.

http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/124/2/4/Comic_Style_by_fatso784.jpg

[ExAm]

Cool, but you need to work on your proportions.

[ICEE]

She got some muscle

[Con]

That dome is huuuuge