Started work on an AR concept, and this is what I have so far.
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Started work on an AR concept, and this is what I have so far.
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I think one of the things that I notice the most right away are your stocks and your grips. They aren't proportional to the rest of the weapon. I imagine you made that front area with the flashlight a grip for your hand. But if you were to flip it sideways it's frigging huge compared to where the actual grip is.
The stock is a bit large, but it also makes me think "this, this is a rifle, treat it well and it will defend you." I say make the pistol grip a little bit longer, as right now I like the rest of it.
The only reason the stock is so large is because of the shape of the magazine, and its placement, but I will try to mess with it a bit :)
Alright, got a bit done on both the grip and the stock.
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Pssst, line weights!
Here we go, did a couple design changes and varied the weights a bit more.
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Better. Rule of thumb is that the more "outside" the layer you are outlining is on the object, the thicker the line.
Added a bit more detail and a bit more style as well.
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