[GALLERY] Newbkilla's past to present work

where do those wires go to?

why would you have a tube come out of the wall liek that, go trough a supportcollumn, and go back into the wall?

try to make things plausible, and not just be there for the sake of having SOMETHING there, and you'll have you things looking five times better on a subconscious level.

try making some lights in the floor, and have some wires go into that, at least you'll show people that they're there for a reason.

for the weird corner-tube-thingies, try having a pipe just hanging from the wall, and having a T-junction where it goes into the wall at some point, or into the roof/floor.

or add in a little S-curve to make it go lower in the middle of the hallway, and hang some kind of thing (display screen for something?) there for example.

(in short: right now it's just some THINGIES repeating, try making the thingies more into objects, and throw off the 1-tiling-thing-only feeling you've got going on.)

Okay, here we go, bumping a couple month old thread, posting new and some old stuff, though you might have seen some in the wip thread.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5887/wallpanel.jpg

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6784/metallicaw.jpg

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/1200/tiledfloor.jpg

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8217/floore.jpg

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4...yllsknife2.jpg

I've finally gotten to spend a decent amount of time in max today, for I haven't been on it for about 3 months :(

I like the first image. For the tiles, I'd say get rid of that little wire. It tells me where it repeats.

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Originally Posted by killer9856

I like the first image. For the tiles, I'd say get rid of that little wire. It tells me where it repeats.

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That, or he could keep it, make the texture size bigger and do 4 plates instead of 1 and have a variation of the wire.

Yea, the wires weren't meant for tiling on this, I just rendered a cluster of those panels together. I change the variation for only 2.

The first image was what I did yesterday, it was going to be wall panel, mostly based off of Quake 4. I could post an image of it if you wanted to see it.

frick nuggets, i haven't posted in here for a while.

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8170/wipagain.jpg

^^ Yes, I am revamping/ re modeling it.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20..._Newbkilla.jpg

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20..._Newbkilla.jpg

^^ I know it isn't finished, I kind of got lazy xD

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20..._Newbkilla.jpg

^^ Desktop background

I like a bunch of stuff there.
The only thing that i dont like and never have, in anyones work, is the fact that there are any exposed wires at all.
We dont build that way now, so i dont see why we would start building with exposed/hazardous wiring in the future.

Great work, love the corridor, its fairly similar to the stuff you posted last year. I'm not too fussed about guns, I'm not a massive fan of gun models because they are all very similar, other art assets interest me alot more.

it's allrihgt, it's all really mediocre, but at least you're definately getting somewhere, and you're definately improving.

keep it up.

Thanks Limited :) Also Neuro, mind if you give me some suggestions? I kind of took some of the ones you gave me last year when I was remodeling this, but I'd really like to improve some more. Latest render- http://i982.photobucket.com/albums/a...g?t=1275163163