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Cables look kind of garbage.. that scene would look better without them imo. You also got pipes going into a wall with an indentation pattern on it which looks bad for continuity. Maybe replace the cables all together with 'power channels' similar to forerunner glowing lights behind frosted glass but more of a human/sci-fi style. Other than that looks pretty dope, bake and use as a prefab in UDK or something.
Thanks Malloy, would you mind finding me a picture of the "power channels" you were talking about? I'll look into replacing some of the wiring. Also, I think I know what you are talking about for the continuity. Is that on the wall by the tubes? Like how they kind of intersect with the tube? If that is what you meant, I understand what you're talking about.
first of all, you seem to have the hang of it, but you don't do muhc with it, you don't get the idea of proper details.
go look at a gun for example, then try to model in EVERY SINGLE LAST PIECE, EVERY LAST DETAIL.
that's what you need for now, proper reference.
i suggest you go find an image of a cool gun you like, (a real one) and build it part by part.