Yea, uh... Was about to say this...
:p
Now, its time to see the new model newbkilla. :)
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It calls to mind your early forerunner work, Mass. I can see why you have taken such an interest, as have I.
Here's hoping Mass and the other good Forerunner modelers on this forum coach you along, Newbkilla, as I don't have the time. I'll be following your work. ;D
His work was my inspiration :) First page of the quick crit thread.
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I did what you showed. But I still hate the top "errection" It doesn't look good at all.
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5862/huhr.jpg
Looking better, but I bet there is much more crit for that. :)
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...otos/ideas.jpg
Not quite everything. It looks like Mass was going for that Guardian look with the overhang. The main overhang block looks too thick and you didn't use most of the design there. The side actually looks pretty good, but there are a couple details missing there as well.
I'd do a side comparison if I were you of the model and then the ref.
What's the green circle above the lower door?
sorry, I was drawing in paint, I meant for the top something more like this:
http://www.bungie.net/images/games/h...sketch_009.jpg
The thing in the front
I do think it looks better now, particularly the wall.
I did do that, but it didn't really help.. It looked like this.
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/6589/sideyiv.jpg
Mass, the image you gave, looked cool at the perspective view, as being a 2d image. But in my model, it looks disgusting.