Quick-Crit 2008-2009

^ lol wut

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Originally Posted by RobertGraham

Also, charfmer the edges on that handle, looks kinda blocky

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If you do this we'll kill you.

:toughguy:

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Originally Posted by Rob Oplawar

The lips look a little unnatural, as do the hips. It looks like she's got a really long upper lip, and there's something I just can't put my finger on about the hips area (and I'm not talking about the lack of anatomical correctness). But I assume her shame will be covered, so it may not matter.

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six pages late, but ross to the rescue

The reason her hips look off is because a) her waist is tiny and b) her hips don't seem to smooth around into a curve across her back, or are otherwise misshapen. I generally suck at explaining these things, but if you look at the shape of a pelvis, it's a cradle (hence the name pelvic girdle). Basically, the two ends of the cradle at the upper front form the widest part, but then they curve around. It's kind of hard to tell at the angle given but as far as I can tell either it doesn't fall off into the curve soon enough, or extends too high (actually it looks like a bit of both). I don't know, that's just my guess - but yeah, something's definitely up.

As for the face, it's too sharp. She must be in her dying years if her eyes are sunken so much as to form a sharp edge on the cheekbones, either that or she has a really dodgy plastic surgeon - same story for the area around the lips. The raw geo looks more like a normal human face than the normals at the moment, smooth those transitions out.

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Originally Posted by paladin

The campaign level Halo. Im looking for the original pic.

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At first I was going to be like "that does not resemble a30 whatsoever"

then I realized Bungie are lazy shits using the same name for 2 completely different maps. :|

Lol, wasnt that a few pages back? But yeah

I like it hunter but it's missing something... can't quite say though.

How does this look? This is my First render and working with Lighting
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/e...weetrender.png
Link to the tut I followed: Click Me

I really don't know why it didn't come out transparent. I might have skipped something, I'm gonna go back and check.

Well, it's shiny.

Yes! I got it this time. I figured out what I did, but I can't do the box because I don't know how to fix it..
BTW, Never use red as a lighting...
Anyways, here are the pics.
Before Lighting
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/e...parent-YAY.png
After Lighting
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/e...rent-YAYII.png

Now, I don't understand why I can't select more then one object and give it different materials. Like if I set those balls to transparent, and then I want to change the box. I change the box and then it changes the balls. Can someone explain to me how to materialize more then one object?