Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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Originally Posted by Corndogman

Gah, it doesn't even matter people. The point is that the scene would look more interesting with some type of plant.

Metkiller, those transparent hexagonal strip patterns in the background have some lines that are pretty screwed up, not sure if that's something you're still working on but I just wanted to point it out. Besides that, I like the patters on most of your textures, you just need to work on your colors and making it look more realistic.

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the point is everyone has done that type of tutorial and it is so simple there is no point in showing renders.

Full pic's not done, but I did a quick side-by-side comparison of the most complete part. I'm definitely getting better at this, as before I'd be terrified to touch hair or skin, but I've still got a ways to go.



Any suggestions?

The wrinkles on the cloth looks like it is sticking out to much.

It's meant to be a few sizes too large, which is why I did that, but with that in mind do you reckon I went a bit overboard?

Yes. The dark areas of the cloth were you try to show depth could be lighter.

Thanks. I'll do some tweaking next time I open it up, see how it looks then.

I agree.

It looks like her clothes are wet. A few too many wrinkles, methinks, and they're a bit too uniformly sized compared with one another.

http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/f...covyfinish.png
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/f...ovyfinish2.png
Ignore the little base, im fixing it up alot. lol

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Originally Posted by ExAm

It looks like her clothes are wet. A few too many wrinkles, methinks, and they're a bit too uniformly sized compared with one another.

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dammit I was gonna say this.