Foot is messed up. looky at the back of the foot. Fix the bump on the right hand too, it's inverted.
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Foot is messed up. looky at the back of the foot. Fix the bump on the right hand too, it's inverted.
It's always been that way, even in H3. That's where the UV seam is.
What can be added to make this look more interesting?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...WPOLY_FP_1.jpg
2443 Triangles.
I can't fix that, i tried already. Btw its the lighting that effects the bump, it could be inverted or not, like rooster saidQuote:
Originally Posted by kid908
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Originally Posted by Hunter
You need to take a look at your refs again because so many parts of that gun are off in proportion and look. For instance, the retractable stock bar, the sights, and that reflex sight. Also, the shape of the upper half of the gun. Get an fp view and see how it should look.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
didnt conscars find fucking blueprints for the pistol, smg, and br?
No one is allowed to mess those up ever again and should be banned for doing so.
People make mistakes.Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
...how?
I don't.
That'd be like messing up on Lego's when they give you the instructions.
Hehe, you remind me of a mug my cousin has:Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
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To err is human.
To forgive is not my policy.
those lines on the magazine.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
and the attachments are off.
hehQuote:
Originally Posted by MetKiller Joe
Instead of a silencer, have a dildo.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
At least it would be original. :downsrim:Quote:
Originally Posted by paladin
Nice work. lol
Make white bullets Xo
Wonder what the fire effect particle would look like :v:Quote:
Originally Posted by paladin
already made this joke to advancebo. Lemme find it.Quote:
Originally Posted by paladin
6/3/2009Quote:
(12:15:09 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: wat about a dumass silencer
(12:15:09 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: lulz
(12:15:15 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: or
(12:15:22 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: smartass silencer 2.0
(12:15:27 AM) heathen: hahah
(12:15:29 AM) heathen: srs
(12:15:32 AM) heathen: I like the one on thar now
(12:15:36 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: k
(12:15:36 AM) heathen: and for the fucks of it
(12:15:39 AM) heathen: for shits and grins
(12:15:43 AM) heathen: give it a dick
(12:15:47 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: lulz
(12:15:51 AM) heathen: think about it
(12:15:53 AM) heathen: it would pwn
(12:16:07 AM) heathen: you could make the melee a badass cockslap
(12:16:12 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: [00:45] AdvanceWarmer™: http://forum.halomaps.org/index.cfm?...013&start=1719
[00:45] AdvanceWarmer™: this
[00:48] =Σ= Hazard™: the silencer looks like a penis
[00:48] =Σ= Hazard™: :\
(12:16:22 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: lol
(12:21:41 AM) heathen: http://tinyurl.com/lvnjew
(12:21:52 AM) AdvanceWarmer™: wah
Dude... I'm almost positive that's what he was talking about... Could be wrong though.Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
Haha Heathen, I was in that quote too.
:eyesroll:
Seems as I asked how it could make it look more interesting, that kind of indicates that I don't want it to be 100% accurate... Sick of making complete copies of Halo 3 stuff, I want to improve it. So, no. I have not got it wrong Lol.
So... what could I add to make it look better?
Design and use a new rail system.
dont listen to chains. he is butthurt.Quote:
Originally Posted by sKc_Chains
it looks fine.
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Originally Posted by Hunter
You can start by doing that. I don't care if you want it accurate or not. Right now those spots look terrible. Fix them.Quote:
Originally Posted by flyinrooster
Wait...what?! What am I butthurt over?Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
Had to design a fake start screen for a fake game.... had to be western themed.
wat
more sides for a smoother silhouetteQuote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
The pains in your butt.Quote:
Originally Posted by sKc_Chains
see?
Oh god :lmao:Quote:
Originally Posted by Llama JuiceHad to design a fake start screen for a fake game.... had to be western themed.
If you made that game I would actually play it
http://theflashgames.blogspot.com/20...struction.htmlQuote:
Originally Posted by Llama JuiceHad to design a fake start screen for a fake game.... had to be western themed.
Reminds me of that.
At last, some nice crit. Cheers.Quote:
Originally Posted by PenGuin1362
Right, everytime i try rendering, with shadows i get this error,
but when i do it with just 1 lighting i dont get no errors what so ever, any more and i get this 1 annoying error, could you help me out please?
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/l...nsionError.jpg
Not really the right place to post that at all... and I've never come across that in Maya. Start a new scene and try rendering and see if it's your Maya or your scene.Quote:
Originally Posted by nick3d
Im sorry but i needed the crit, my thread never gets viewed so, i thought id shove it in here, its also in my thread but here is quicker for a bit off feedback, thanks, ill try it with just a cube and stuff :)
E:
It works with a different render scene, but it might be my RAM on my computer, or my computer specs, not enough memory to render it, or my graphics card, because i know my graphics card is wank lol
lol maya
i r post concept sketch for draco bridge naow, k?
Looks nice. Try to make it out of a glass that is see through on the inside but not the outside.Quote:
Originally Posted by AdmiralBacon
rofl my only quick advice is... study the cinematics in Halo Wars, shows a perfect observation deck and captains room, yada yada yada... :P
OH MAN, THAT MAP WAS THE BEST FOR GRIEFINGQuote:
Originally Posted by AdmiralBacon
by the way consider putting nav up front as well as gunnery
no, just make it partially mirrored or something, it'd be kinda cool to be able to see inside itQuote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
Kind of boring, it's almost like a reception desk area. No joke.
Those are the pilot consoles and the chair is right in the middle. It's more of a layout sketch than anything else.
It's not like the ship needs to be interesting at every turn. You'll be looking out over the map.Quote:
Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR
I've spent some time doing just that.Quote:
rofl my only quick advice is... study the cinematics in Halo Wars, shows a perfect observation deck and captains room, yada yada yada... :P
Overall, the design is based on Mass's concept sketch of the exterior, which I've accepted and pushed off to BTGII to start modeling this weekend. So, yes,glasssuper thick plastic-like material floors and windows throughout the bridge. The lack of visible windows was a major problem with the original Draco, which is why I've moved the gunner into the bridge and accepted Mass's extremely "transparent" design. Also, it just seems right after looking at the Spirit of Fire for literally hours today.
e: As it's a design aspect, I guess I can ask here - should the windows be heavily tinted so it's hard to see in from the outside but still possible? Or no tinting? Or opaque golden reflection like on the Cairo?
It should look like the bridge of a military vessel, not the lobby of an upmarket hotel.
More consoles. More fuseboxes and relays. More access hatches.
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Originally Posted by nick3d
fixed
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/t...nsionError.jpg
+rep :D
Why not do what everyone is doing and be lazy and make a competition on its design? :)Quote:
Originally Posted by AdmiralBacon
That is the most childish answer i have ever had off any1 on this forum and trust me iv had some childish shit on here, you use 3ds right?? well that's your preference, if you go to university to do games design, you spend more time using Maya than you do 3ds because it is obviously the better program, 3ds... 1 year, Maya... 2 years. And no it isn't because it has loads of tools and all this shit which i get off hunter, its a completely different way of going into design, better user interface, to my preferences anyway, your access off it is alot easier, make your own tool bars and stuff like that, its a more expensive program, it is used by alot of well known industriesQuote:
Originally Posted by neuro
Forget about what program is better. No one so far knows the answer to your problem, search else where. Use google for fucks sake.
PS he's a professional game artist. Also, no, Maya is not more expensive nor is it the better game design tool. hth.Quote:
Originally Posted by nick3d
Hai!
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/641...unfinished.png
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1...nfinished1.png
These renders are slightly outdated; I've done the joint guards and have added the little details on the legs. Poly count is 9,300, and I'm hoping to get it into CE (I know...OH SHI)
Put it into Unreal.Quote:
Originally Posted by k9colin
9300 tris or 9300 polies? If it's polies, it shouldn't be anything close to that.Quote:
Originally Posted by k9colin
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6817/bluhilllogo.jpg
Need an opinion or two on this. It is the logo for the site in my signature (bluHill.net).
Thanks goes to snaf for doing most of the work. I just did the render.
Its polies, but remember I modelled like half of the model in triangles, with each triangle being counted as a poly.Quote:
Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR
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Originally Posted by MetKiller Joe
Can you ask snaf how he did the grid like pattern on the mesh?
My guess would be he duplicated the mesh, put a slight push modifier on it, gave it a white wire material. The original mesh just got a blue transparent material.
@Fear: It was basically what Corndogman described. I duplicated the mesh with turbosmooth, added a push modifier, and then applied a gradient as the opacity map so that it fades across the mesh.
The material was a forced wire with a white diffuse and some self-illumination.
I got the extra spiny effect by accident, although, you could probably duplicate that somehow either in the shader properties or using more gradients.
2517 Triangles.
Look better?
The foregrip is ugly as sin, the red dot doesn't look rounded enough, and the wire going to the laser pointer looks too thick.
Make the stock bar fatter, it's far too skinny.
The shape of the reflex is wrong.
I see no real different. make the outer part of the doted sight more round at the top, it looks bad right there.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
The handles are kind of fugly imo. I also don't like the scope thing. It looks to tall, again, imo.
I dunno about you, but I don't fancy holding onto that grip for any extended period of time...
is this bad
yes
sorry
The clouds are way too spongy, if you know what I mean.
The clouds are ok, just need more depth, you need to establish a point of light then give the clouds shadows wherever they face the opposite direction, or where ever the bases of "hills" are formed by the clouds. You need to show depth, which can be done by making the planes that are further away more the color of the atmosphere, aka the color of the sky. Also go look at some tutorials on lighting, shadows actually sort of tend to bleed the color of the environment, while in the light the things true color is shown. So your shadows would be a mix of brown and dark orange, and the places in sunlight would be a golden copper tone. Since I have no idea what style you are going for, I can not give anymore cit on the type of brush strokes and other things to use.Quote:
Originally Posted by rossmum
is this bad
i neglected to mention it's an edited screenshotQuote:
Originally Posted by Newbkilla
i tweaked the lighting on the mosquitoes and the colours over the whole pic, plus did the flak bursts
clouds are 100% ingame, although i see how they could use some shadowing
Ew, that shit is nasty... it tastes like liquid skittles.
But it does give you a big jolt of energy thou (to me) It's ok but how'd you what liquid skittles taste like :raise:Quote:
Originally Posted by paladin
For that I drink Dr. RedDew.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spartan094
Its a mix of Dr. Pepper, Mountain Dew energy drink thing, and Red Bull.
Heh, I should try that sometime.Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
Eh, gotta say i'm not fond of what you did there. It really looks like it's getting pushed out of a silver/gray vagina with a glowy light inside. :ohdear:
So it's not just me who saw it like that?Quote:
Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR
decided to start working on something in my free time.
this is just a blockout, to get the shapes and proportions and positions of stuff laid down.
this is about half an hour of work, propably a bit more.
shouldn't be hard to guess what this is going to end up being, right?
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/t...r/stuff/BO.jpg
thats a terrifying thoughtQuote:
Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR
Neuro, that sorta reminds me of a covenant dropship.
Then again.. sex sells...Quote:
Originally Posted by PenGuin1362
Might hit a really really weird fetish market that they've been missing out on.
Snaf your sick minded. :(
Now I see it everytime I look at it. :I
I don't, it doesn't even look like a vagina. snaf you lie! :P
Snaf can't possibly be wrong, seeing as he's seen more vaginas than there are members on this forum. :eng101:Quote:
Originally Posted by FluffyDucky™
:ohdear:Quote:
Originally Posted by Reaper Man
Relatives dont count :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by Reaper Man
But your mother does :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by Malloy
zing!!!!!
Unless you attended class with all of the special needs students, you're not excused to not know that your 'Mother' comes under the 'blood relative' category.
Edit::rolleyes:
...the fuck kinda family reunions do you have? :gonk:Quote:
Originally Posted by Malloy
Fat, Stereotypical inbred orgy fests? I thought everyone did it.
Apparently not.
...complaining virgins aside, get back to the point of the thread.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/renta...ls/shittex.jpg
It looks like it's coming along decently to me. It's my first texture, so I have no idea what I'm doing tbh. I plan on putting it in Halo. I already have the blade looking all purty and glowy.
Fuck, I shoulda said that! I always tell him that his a whore! It's so true though! Ahaahah! Love you SnaffffyyyyyyyyyyyyyQuote:
Originally Posted by Reaper Man
So, I think I'm done with my website. Crit please.
http://www.feignphoto.com
I need a better photo for my bio page, the one that's currently there is a placeholder. Ignore the weird line on the gallery, I'm trying to fix that, and I will also pay for the full version so that it doesn't have the copyright etc.
In fact, the gallery is rough for now, there's a few things I need to fix/figure out, but at least it works, albeit messily (incorrect shadow size, lousy thumbnails, etc etc)
It looks really good! I love the logo thing. Contact info is pretty neat too :p The bio pic is cute :)
But you can't even see my face, it's pretty useless lol. I hate self portraits. But, better I do it myself then ask somebody else.Quote:
Originally Posted by FluffyDucky™
Nice site, Reaper!
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1907/capture2.png
need crit on dis door skin for rev
still to do:
-lights and other details as suggested by you guys.
-strip textures
-inner door shield textures (visible through windows)
Looks pretty good so far.
So I take it noone noticed my stuff up top.
