[GALLERY] Newbkilla's past to present work

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Originally Posted by Mass

Kill it, I'm not convinced it even needs it.

By the way, I meant those circles as those circle-lights from the halo 1 forerunner lights.

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Right, well I removed it just to render and show you, but it looks a bit homo to me..

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7650/homo.jpg

I like how it looks, that erection was a nuisance to look at, and how it is now leaves room for a banshee to actually fly up there without interference. Now it's looking a lot more like Epitaph than anything else, which is cool.

Excuse my lovely paint skills, but here's a concept I drew out on paper, but I drew in ps.

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7...aintskills.jpg

I'm thinking off having that as the entrance to the structure, the place behind the place where I deleted the erection. If you don't understand, that's fine, I'll edit my render to show you.

E/ Hope this might help, but it's gonna be the entrance by the landing pad.

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5...skillsrend.jpg

Looks like the door from Halo in Halo 3.

Looks much better now without the erection, it looks more like an impenetrable fortress than some wimpy little base now. I would suggest getting rid of those extrude>inset>intrude rectangles on the very sides of the walls, they seem like you just threw them in there so the area wouldn't be empty, not like real details.

The door seems like it would fit better in an interior hallways, but its hard to tell what it will look like from a paint drawing. I guess we'll see how it looks when you model it.

I like how its looking now.

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1263/smalln.jpg

I changed the erection to a doorway.

It's looking better, but the doorway could be smaller.

Good job, I am liking it more and more. :)

Going to bed now,

I fixed up proportions of the door compared to vehicles and bipeds. I also started working on the inside of the hallway on top.

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3763/bettern.jpg