Quick-Crit 2008-2009

Very nice looking animation ICEE, I like the style and flow of it from when he knocks the...ammo box(?) out of it to when he makes a little jump with the gun over to the position where he lifts the top. The insertion of the ammo box could use a bit more movement with the gun, and at one point, it looks like it just goes over the same motion twice (during the time in which he's putting the bullet chain into position). I have an idea for what you can do with the bullet chain insertion also so it doesn't look like the hand just sits still (even though I see movement), but for now I must be off to school.

Little update on the monitor.
I've started unwrapping my monitor and started with the eye peice.
If anyone can give some crit on this on how to pack the uv's and how to improve generaly that would be greatly appreciated.
I've used the render to texture feature after reading about it in a book i purchased sometime back.
Also been working on materials as well to try and make the texture seem better.
Sorry snaf about using the same sphere model but after tweaking with the one you suggested it turned out worse than i started off with so i went back to the first.
Theres about 160 polies in the entire eye peice including the mount.

http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1639/eyeeyej.jpg

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Originally Posted by ODX

Very nice looking animation ICEE, I like the style and flow of it from when he knocks the...ammo box(?) out of it to when he makes a little jump with the gun over to the position where he lifts the top. The insertion of the ammo box could use a bit more movement with the gun, and at one point, it looks like it just goes over the same motion twice (during the time in which he's putting the bullet chain into position). I have an idea for what you can do with the bullet chain insertion also so it doesn't look like the hand just sits still (even though I see movement), but for now I must be off to school.

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ok cool man. Ill be on xfire later, hit me up then. I was actually planning on redoing basically all the node gun frames after the mag insert

made for the dodgeball club i created
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y37...s/db_commy.jpg

Hey thats kinda cool

The red text is very odd looking but besides that i love it.

It would look better if the text by the fist was the same as the title color.

@Snowy: Only complaint I have with it is the "O's" that look like hourglasses. They're too "repetitive" IMO. Maybe you could switch it up a little bit, with maybe a different font? OR use the same font, just use a different but fitting font for the "O's".

Also, is it just me or do those five stars look of center?

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Originally Posted by Saggy

@Snowy: Only complaint I have with it is the "O's" that look like hourglasses. They're too "repetitive" IMO. Maybe you could switch it up a little bit, with maybe a different font? OR use the same font, just use a different but fitting font for the "O's".

Also, is it just me or do those five stars look of center?

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The font is fine the way it is imo. And it is just you.

My only gripe, make the fist a different red than the star. Slightly different.

Make the T in "Party" the same as the one in "The." Also make the G in the second "dodgeball" uppercase, the same as it is in the first dodgeball.

The stars do look off-center since you say that, but I feel like its just my eyes playing tricks on me.