Quick-Crit 2008-2009

we'll see soon ;]

and what exactly are you looking for crit on..?

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Originally Posted by ICEE

and what exactly are you looking for crit on..?

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idk, does my timeline look well organized sweetheart?

Based on this, but I didn't really like the near part of the tower so I went in a different direction with it.

OHH MY GOD <3

Looks a bit thin.

yeah, beef it up just a tad.

Certain areas are just... off. Most of it is great, but some parts appear lacking or out-of-place. Work it over a few more times then it'll be great.

A bit anorexic and visually flat. It needs tapers in different directions. Check out my tutorial.

Just try to keep in mind that monolithic structures taper towards the top. Your piece will be much more substantial if you start thinking this way.

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Originally Posted by Sever

Certain areas are just... off. Most of it is great, but some parts appear lacking or out-of-place. Work it over a few more times then it'll be great.

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Working on it. Pretty sure it's a result of my modelling it as much as possible from the angle in the concept.

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Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR

A bit anorexic and visually flat. It needs tapers in different directions. Check out my tutorial.

Just try to keep in mind that monolithic structures taper towards the top. Your piece will be much more substantial if you start thinking this way.

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I cannot for the life of me do tapers properly, even with the tutorial. Probably because a lot of my towers have fairly complex shapes and tapering ends up with a good number of nonplanars, which I'm fairly anal about not having in models.