Quick-Crit 2008-2009

Animations are by Hayabusa.

its cool except for the counter

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Originally Posted by ICEE

its cool except for the counter

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I don't like the design =\ it just looks odd. IDK why, but it just does.

i kinda like it, except make it a dot-site

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Originally Posted by Ki11a_FTW

i kinda like it, except make it a dot-site

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I think its supposed to be, cept its shitty atm.

Let's try again.
http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/q...kinggarage.jpg
Taking Snaf's advice and completely remodeling Gridlock.
Things going off to either side are monorail tracks, shield generator is just there to show why one side of the garage is so bland (so people don't escape the map).

I don't want to fuck up again, so what do you guys think?

Question is: Are you happy with it?

Because there isn't much to crit.

Dunno why you have that big chamfer at the door going all the way to the window edge. That looks bad. Look at the odst concept art if you want to see how storefronts should look. You're yet again trying to do an odst theme without actually understanding the stlye. There are no real lone shop buildings, everything is connected. This is turning out to be just boxes with stretched octagonal holes, though admittedly so far you're modeling better.

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Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR

Dunno why you have that big chamfer at the door going all the way to the window edge. That looks bad. Look at the odst concept art if you want to see how storefronts should look. You're yet again trying to do an odst theme without actually understanding the stlye. There are no real lone shop buildings, everything is connected. This is turning out to be just boxes with stretched octagonal holes, though admittedly so far you're modeling better.

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It's a parking garage, sorry for not clarifying that in my post.