Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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Originally Posted by ICEE

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Extendmag.gif

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Watching just the left hand, it kind of just 'appears' on the screen with the second mag, and then the insert seems weak and effortless, you should probably give it a little pause and stop making him get it right into the slot each time.

Also, I really, really, really think you should start working on organizing your fingers and hands more, as well as your rendering. While your actual animating skill is, overall, getting very well-developed, your origins are completely destroyed from the lack of noticeable care given to the hands and fingers.

(Hint: I said organizing, not making more realistic. You can still keep them in that funky way for stylistic purposes, but they really do need to look much cleaner than they are.)

Just a little model I decided to practice with, since I haven't modeled in over a year.

It's about 3k tris.


http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/w...lark610/g1.jpg
http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/w...lark610/g2.jpg
http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/w...lark610/g3.jpg

I'm not finished yet; obviously, because of the lack of a magazine, but I need some thoughts on the design before I continue. Besides, its late :ugh:

not ugly.

I like it.

Fronts a little boring though.

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l4...chetlaser3.png

I don't like the supports, I'm going to change those.

That looks awesome Geo. I like the design, keep modeling!

Ty :downs: I'm trying my hardest to get back into the swing of things haha

Gonna be doing a bit more work on the base, but this seems a lot closer to what I wanted.

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l4...tlaserwip4.png

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l4...tlaserwip5.png

add something to the front of the platform on the bottom so that it has more than the one tiny support in the back of it. Other than that it looks rather spiffy sir.

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Originally Posted by Sel

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l4...chetlaser3.png

I don't like the supports, I'm going to change those.

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looks like a baby's penis.

Your new one looks great though.

Final touches.

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l4...tlaserwip6.png