Quick-Crit 2010

A quick shotgun firing I made for the hell of it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5uVQKGvM8k

Looks decent but I'm not liking the return to origins.

it looks very rigid and jumpy. try and smooth it out some

and




basicly finished, got to finish some small details and fix some stuff up

I'd say add another edge around the front handle, make it a bit less jagged.

The inside edge of the mag also doesn't look right. Smoothe that out too...

The whole magazine could use a redo; it just looks wrong.

Add some detail to the grip aswell.
Fix the rails too. They're uneven.

Basically finished? How many reference are you working with? Just about every detail is wrong or exaggerated.

like this?

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Originally Posted by annihilation

Fix the rails too. They're uneven.

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how so? they uneven between rails or height?

EDIT: i used bout 4 or 5 refs