[GALLERY] Newbkilla's past to present work

[Joshflighter]

Reminds me of Avalanche, especially with Mass's additions.

Yea, uh... Was about to say this...




Now, its time to see the new model newbkilla.

[Newbkilla]

Reminds me of Avalanche, especially with Mass's additions.

Yeah, I see what you mean there. And also, thanks Mass That looks real awesome now, I'm gonna fix it up and see. Thanks again Mass.

[Rob Oplawar]

It calls to mind your early forerunner work, Mass. I can see why you have taken such an interest, as have I.

Here's hoping Mass and the other good Forerunner modelers on this forum coach you along, Newbkilla, as I don't have the time. I'll be following your work. ;D

[Newbkilla]

His work was my inspiration First page of the quick crit thread.

[Newbkilla]

Double Post:

I did what you showed. But I still hate the top "errection" It doesn't look good at all.

[Joshflighter]

Looking better, but I bet there is much more crit for that.

[MetKiller Joe]

Double Post:

I did what you showed. But I still hate the top "errection" It doesn't look good at all.

Not quite everything. It looks like Mass was going for that Guardian look with the overhang. The main overhang block looks too thick and you didn't use most of the design there. The side actually looks pretty good, but there are a couple details missing there as well.

I'd do a side comparison if I were you of the model and then the ref.

[NuggetWarmer]

What's the green circle above the lower door?

[Mass]

sorry, I was drawing in paint, I meant for the top something more like this:

The thing in the front

I do think it looks better now, particularly the wall.

[Newbkilla]

Not quite everything. It looks like Mass was going for that Guardian look with the overhang. The main overhang block looks too thick and you didn't use most of the design there. The side actually looks pretty good, but there are a couple details missing there as well.

I'd do a side comparison if I were you of the model and then the ref.

I did do that, but it didn't really help.. It looked like this.


Mass, the image you gave, looked cool at the perspective view, as being a 2d image. But in my model, it looks disgusting.