Long Run

[SnaFuBAR]

Holy shit, someone posts something decent and you gusy get up in arms. It's a good start, just work on the terain more, and the cliff edges. Other than that, it's a decent map. The people on the forums here are expecting everything they see to be unbelievable, don't get discouraged by them.

who got up in arms, masters? most of the comments are a reflection of your very own criticism.

[SuperSunny]

Just make sure the textures don't look obviously tiled so much, and blend the ground with the cliffs. Add a bit more variation into the geometry, and 100% into the lighting.

Change around the textures yourself as well! Make new shaders, keep it a bit original! Otherwise good start!

Add a snow weather particle, and also thicken the fog. It should be pretty thick because of how the environment looks, and it'll also add some flavor into your map.

[jngrow]

who got up in arms, masters? most of the comments are a reflection of your very own criticism.

Well, some people pretty much said "OMG ITS SO AWFUL GO KILL YOURSELF".
There's a difference between not sugarcoating, and shitcoating.

E: ok nvm, it was really just like, one or two people.

[PopeAK49]

i have to say that its a big improvment from your rescent maps and you showed the best of your basic skill in this map. Two thumbs up for you because you show that you cannot give up on a project no matter how it looks you are probably one of my most favorite mapper who can improve really fast with your projects.

[Andrew_b]

I fixed some of the bad cliff areas, made the cliffs have a chamfered like effect out of the ground (I did not chamfer them though), And i moved some verts on the top of the first set of cliffs on the Z axis. Actually I moved all, not some. I may get some pictures if I get alot more done. BTW, I just got back from vacation.