Its like somewhat like something the Combine would have. That's the first thing I thought of, which, in my opinion (combine architecture), looks like bent out of shape forerunner.
What screamed at me was the fact that it looked like a Combine suspension bridge counterweight (for a very small suspension bridge).
Also, expect bluntness on these forums; they are infamous for them. They help you, and they tear you down. It is unfair sometimes, but so is life.
The huge spikes that turn it from something forerunner into something that's not :? Sure the bottom looks forerunner but the spikes kill the look. Just because it looks like the original doesn't mean it's therefore forerunner.
Stop whining. I don't have to offer critique on every single piece of work. I'm free to offer my opinion, just like everyone else on the forums. You guys are like a couple of over-sensitive little girls. RELAX! Primo, you sound like a real badass.
The original was pretty bloody vague as it is. Without the pipes or an actual image of what it is, there's no way I would've recognised that.
This is a quick crit thread, a place to receive criticism.I don't have to offer critique on every single piece of work.
Its in the campaign and a multiplayer map.Without the pipes or an actual image of what it is, there's no way I would've recognised that.
Also thanks for all the -rep. Snaf you need to realise that beginners are not perfect, people actually make mistakes. You expect everyone to be at your level (if that's even anything). If its not up to your level its literally shit to you.
Last edited by Evil_Monkey; December 8th, 2008 at 05:35 PM.
Ok, I think this should stop here - this thread has been derailed enough. We're all just going around in circles. There was nothing wrong with what SnaF said. As i've said, just because he didn't offer crit doesn't mean he doesn't have the right to post an answer to a question you openly asked to everyone on the forum.
He could have stated why it had no resemblance at all, that's all.
When I said it stops here I meant it; don't try and get the last word ~Timo
Last edited by Timo; December 8th, 2008 at 05:41 PM.
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