Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Advancebo]

Wires arent that messy...

[Heathen]

Mech is very right.

Damn.

[Advancebo]

And move those insets at the top, where that circle is with the wires coming out, to align with the circle.

[Corndogman]

I say lose the wires entirely. There would be no reason for someone to put glass over that section just to show off a bunch of messy wires. The wiring inside your walls probably looks like that, but you wouldn't put a window there for everyone to see it. Put something more interesting there if your going to have glass.

[CSFLOYD]

You guys have seen DEEHunter's avatar right?

It made me rofl so hard I modeled it!
But I didnt want an avatar sized render, So I made it a background!!!
I dont think anyone will find this funny, but I do.
Its called: Guy in a box.
I dont think the camera is right, but you can still tell what it is in both pictures.



Or if you want edited version (that is if your even interested in this thing at all.)

[SnaFuBAR]

proportions are wrong

[rossmum]

you fucked up modelling a box with a hole and some eyes

owned

anyway,

[FireScythe]

Thats looking really nice, only things that come to mind are how uninteresting the land looks, as the trees are the only feature on the landscape and the texture is too low res to break up the mass of green with tracks, hedges and such. Also the fog density on the right makes the horizon look lower than it is.

I'm really liking the plane. How come the wing guns have been removed though?

[CSFLOYD]

you fucked up modelling a box with a hole and some eyes

owned

No, I didnt you moron, its just didnt have porportions exact.
It is still a box with a hole and some white spheres, it just isnt exact with the picture I based it off of.
Im fixing the porportions like Snafubar said.

E:
how about now?

[rossmum]

wow way to get trolled by a joke

ps wrong proportions count as fucking up on an object that simple, since they're about the only thing you could fuck up without deliberately trying to suck