Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[=sw=warlord]

Someone mind commenting on this sooner i know what can be fixed sooner il go fix it.

Been working on this for a few days got some good advice from snafubar.
There are still a few polygons needed to be filled in but the majority of the model is done and i've gone into detailing the front end of it.
Any crit or advice on this would be greatly appreciated.
In the firest image please ignore the plane slicing through the rear, that plane was for me to get the front proportions right using a screenshot from halo3.

[FluffyDucky™]

Figured I'd practice some sculpting today. Probably my first ever real sculpt.

Lips need more of an outline imo. Also try messing around with the shape of the face, like make it skinner, longer, more distinct chin, adams apple. Maybe the shape of the ears and the forehead?

Just getting ya to think, not saying it's bad.

Might even help you to have a theme as to what kind of person you wanna sculpt, eg - stereotyping.

[Disaster]

Yeah. I've done alot more to the face since then. I'll try to get another pic tomorrow morning.

I've made the face more masculine because in that pic it looked to feminine specifically a more defined chin and pronounced features.

Thinking about turning it into a sci fi character thing.

[FluffyDucky™]

Oh awesome, sounds good will crit tomoz

[Chainsy]

Looks sorta like Bruce Willis without any hair.

[ExAm]

I was thinking more like John Locke.

Sort of.

[Con]

[SnaFuBAR]

Someone mind commenting on this sooner i know what can be fixed sooner il go fix it.

You forgot to add smoothing to the inside of the sides, and it looks like you're not exactly following the bezel design around the front.

[Timo]

Nice panorama Con, how many photos did you use?

[FluffyDucky™]

My guess is three, I can see the pavement lines missed in the middle XD It is a very nice photo though, I love the colors!