Quick-Crit 2010

[Advancebo]

Bo, don't say the rails are crap, you can't even see the details and how its modeled. All you can judge is just by what is it now.

Its more likely than you think, I modeled the rails. So I'm pretty sure I know how the details are and how its modeled.

By the way floyd, the barrels have too many polys concentrated in that one location, compared to the rest of the model. Poly Distribution?

[BobtheGreatII]

The part where the scope is mounted is still wrong. And your grip and hand guard are still wrong. Please fix.

Grip Sketch:

[CSFLOYD]

The part where the scope is mounted is still wrong. And your grip and hand guard are still wrong. Please fix.

Grip Sketch:
image

OK its not like that at all, perspective can change a lot.

[BobtheGreatII]

Then give me a side view.

[CSFLOYD]

Then give me a side view.

https://www.wmclan.net/upload/uploads/floyd/DMRSIDE.jpg

[ICEE]

You really need to work on the lighting

[CSFLOYD]

You really need to work on the lighting

Was messing with lighting/materials.

[BobtheGreatII]

Your grip section appears to be very squished.



Note: I would like it to be known that I'm not saying you should be overlapping. But That you need to fit these things within that space. If you have to make the gun longer or something. The only thing I keep thinking is that a Spartan's hand has to fit in that, and at the moment I don't really see that happening. But I may be wrong. But it's difficult to really tell without a render of the side view of the actual gun. Not trying to be mean, just trying to get you a good model.

The other thing I've noticed is that in Bungie's model, they actually have the scope sitting on the rail, yours is not. So I would suggest lengthening the rail and placing the scope on top of it.

Other than that it looks like a nice model. Would love to see it in game soon.

Edit:
Also, the notches on the grips need to be able to fit a finger between, your notch between the trigger guard and the first extrude is way too small.

[CSFLOYD]

https://www.wmclan.net/upload/upload...dforyoubob.jpg
Updated.
E: Havent done the rails for the scope :P

[Hunter]

*IMAGE*
You posted the old on Spartan...

Oi, mister. You know we like wire frames

Looks nice though, poly distribution looks good as there is a good amount of detail everywhere. And fuck the tri count, because that is high already. You should just make it higher and bake it.

Although I say that all the time I have not yet done it successfully my self lmao.