Quick-Crit 2010

[kid908]

Haven't submitted anything in a while so......

[Malloy]

Is that a tomahawk spear flying towards her head in the distance?

[PlasbianX]

Is that a tomahawk spear flying towards her head in the distance?

Looks like a signature to me.

[Roostervier]

let's keep the topic on legitimate criticism

[n00ber]

will most definantly redo the stock, also i dont know what that line in the body of the gun is, doesnt show up in the viewport soo.
EDIT: fixed the problem, thanks penguin.

[PenGuin1362]

its a result of poorly generated edges... well lack there of in that case. the entire side of the gun is one face and those holes aren't agreeing with that. cut some faces in by the holes and it'll fix the overlapping face

[SnaFuBAR]

use more references and more polies. it looks kinda lopsided.

[n00ber]

better?

[SnaFuBAR]

redo the dust cover, everything in front of the sights. that includes the gas block.

side of the dust cover is not indented like that around the ridge, i have no idea how you came to that.
shape of the foregrip is completely wrong.
front sights/gas tube is wrong.

i like the mag though, good job on that.

[ICEE]

Noticed theres no mag release.