Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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Originally Posted by Hunter

Just want to know if the unwrap is "good"? Bare in mind there are more parts which will take the space in the middle.

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You could have used space WAY more efficiently. A lot of parts could have been scaled up. Without that "middle" though, it's really hard to say. It looks clean at least.

So I'm now venturing into the world of covie - if anyone can give me some opinions on if I'm in the right direction, it'd be much appreciated. Irony of ironies, I was pretty wasteful myself with the UV.





Diffuse :
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/764...diffuseyo2.jpg

Specular :
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4...eryspectw5.jpg

Bump :
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6...erybumpcr0.jpg

Tris : 764

Yeah, I know the cicle is distorted on the top.

Looks covenant-esque but it doesn't really seem it.

Add a couple darker grudge-styled brushes on the colored part for the diffuse. And perhaps make the color slightly a bit more red.

make it a bit more purpley.

Something about the top bothers me.

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Originally Posted by Invader Veex

Add a couple darker grudge-styled brushes on the colored part for the diffuse. And perhaps make the color slightly a bit more red.

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Originally Posted by Heathen

make it a bit more purpley.

Something about the top bothers me.

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Keep in mind that the coloring is handled by a change-color map; it can be literally anything.

Heathen, could you (if possible) try to be more specific about what's wrong? I also feel something's not quite right, but I can't tell what - that's why I posted it here.

Thatsthe thing...I am not really sure. I just dont think it looks covie.

It needs to have more of an organic feel to it.

Do I smell Covenant Fusion Coil?

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Originally Posted by teh lag

Keep in mind that the coloring is handled by a change-color map; it can be literally anything.

Heathen, could you (if possible) try to be more specific about what's wrong? I also feel something's not quite right, but I can't tell what - that's why I posted it here.

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Too many sharp angles, looks like some kind of hybrid of Forerunner and High Charity styles

It looks to hard and blunt. It should have a smoothness to it, and maybe make the edges look almost sharp. It looks more human that covenant to me.