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Thread: Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Hunter View Post
    Just want to know if the unwrap is "good"? Bare in mind there are more parts which will take the space in the middle.
    You could have used space WAY more efficiently. A lot of parts could have been scaled up. Without that "middle" though, it's really hard to say. It looks clean at least.

    So I'm now venturing into the world of covie - if anyone can give me some opinions on if I'm in the right direction, it'd be much appreciated. Irony of ironies, I was pretty wasteful myself with the UV.





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    Yeah, I know the cicle is distorted on the top.
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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Looks covenant-esque but it doesn't really seem it.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Add a couple darker grudge-styled brushes on the colored part for the diffuse. And perhaps make the color slightly a bit more red.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    make it a bit more purpley.

    Something about the top bothers me.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Invader Veex View Post
    Add a couple darker grudge-styled brushes on the colored part for the diffuse. And perhaps make the color slightly a bit more red.
    Quote Originally Posted by Heathen View Post
    make it a bit more purpley.

    Something about the top bothers me.
    Keep in mind that the coloring is handled by a change-color map; it can be literally anything.

    Heathen, could you (if possible) try to be more specific about what's wrong? I also feel something's not quite right, but I can't tell what - that's why I posted it here.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Thatsthe thing...I am not really sure. I just dont think it looks covie.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    It needs to have more of an organic feel to it.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Do I smell Covenant Fusion Coil?

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by teh lag View Post
    Keep in mind that the coloring is handled by a change-color map; it can be literally anything.

    Heathen, could you (if possible) try to be more specific about what's wrong? I also feel something's not quite right, but I can't tell what - that's why I posted it here.
    Too many sharp angles, looks like some kind of hybrid of Forerunner and High Charity styles

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    It looks to hard and blunt. It should have a smoothness to it, and maybe make the edges look almost sharp. It looks more human that covenant to me.

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