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The top part of that can just... bothers me horribly.
the ends of it would be dented in somewhat, it wouldn't be just a perfect edge if you have that abuse on the can itself.
http://www.llamajuice.com/h2v/SmokeGrenadeTop.jpg
But that's just me being picky.
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Needs more contrast and sharper light metals. It's hard to see any kind of detail on the exposed metal because it's all white; make it a bit darker. Make the bottom a bit darker than the top, maybe throwing some earthy tones at the bottom and blue (sky) tones at the top will help.
I don't really texture, but that might help make it look a bit less boring.
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It's a goddamn grenade. I could understand if it were a gun, but its a bloody grenade. Are you guys expecting it to look like its been chucked at a wall over and over and never actually used?
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well considering that he made the top of it look like that, why not?
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Cruise Missile
Pretty basic and bland but didnt want to start with any thing too complicated as I'm still a noob :)
The elevated plane at the head of the missile is suppose to be paneling but I havent finished/gave up on it.
Also the extended bits around the wings (like the RL has) isnt on the real thing but I added it to spice it up a bit.

As for texture, I started it and god was it awful, so texturing if/will be done in future.
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It looks like a Grain Silo made into an improvised cruise missile. It's obvious you're trying to make a Tomahawk, so here are some reference pictures. :awesome:
http://www.aerospaceweb.org/question...s/tomahawk.jpg
http://www.tonyrogers.com/images/wea...k_01_large.jpg
http://911review.com/errors/pentagon/imgs/thawk.jpg
You seem to have given the warhead a cone look, you need to change that.
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Yeah the top picture was my main reference and your right about the cone :)
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Working on some forerunner generator arrays.
So far i have this.
Any advice on what to add/remove be greatly appreciated.
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5927/upcloseik2.jpghttp://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8026/render1xk4.jpg
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Is that how its going to go into the ground, or have you just put a plane there to render it?
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Is that how its going to go into the ground, or have you just put a plane there to render it?
i am planning on having it fit into the ground like that.
I'm tempted to make a new lift platform using those as the generators you see on the lift you go down to get the index on.