Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Llama Juice]

The top part of that can just... bothers me horribly.

the ends of it would be dented in somewhat, it wouldn't be just a perfect edge if you have that abuse on the can itself.



But that's just me being picky.

[legionaire45]

Needs more contrast and sharper light metals. It's hard to see any kind of detail on the exposed metal because it's all white; make it a bit darker. Make the bottom a bit darker than the top, maybe throwing some earthy tones at the bottom and blue (sky) tones at the top will help.

I don't really texture, but that might help make it look a bit less boring.

[Rentafence]

It's a goddamn grenade. I could understand if it were a gun, but its a bloody grenade. Are you guys expecting it to look like its been chucked at a wall over and over and never actually used?

[SnaFuBAR]

well considering that he made the top of it look like that, why not?

[Limited]

Cruise Missile
Pretty basic and bland but didnt want to start with any thing too complicated as I'm still a noob


The elevated plane at the head of the missile is suppose to be paneling but I havent finished/gave up on it.

Also the extended bits around the wings (like the RL has) isnt on the real thing but I added it to spice it up a bit.



As for texture, I started it and god was it awful, so texturing if/will be done in future.

[TeeKup]

It looks like a Grain Silo made into an improvised cruise missile. It's obvious you're trying to make a Tomahawk, so here are some reference pictures. :awesome:





You seem to have given the warhead a cone look, you need to change that.

[Limited]

Yeah the top picture was my main reference and your right about the cone

[=sw=warlord]

Working on some forerunner generator arrays.
So far i have this.
Any advice on what to add/remove be greatly appreciated.

[Limited]

Is that how its going to go into the ground, or have you just put a plane there to render it?

[=sw=warlord]

Is that how its going to go into the ground, or have you just put a plane there to render it?

i am planning on having it fit into the ground like that.
I'm tempted to make a new lift platform using those as the generators you see on the lift you go down to get the index on.