Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Chainsy]

Messing around on my Tablet



5 mins ish

Looking good, I see the effect oyur trying to do here and I like it. Give more definition to the back of the body because from the light source it would create a shine on his features.

[fatso784]

Looking good, I see the effect oyur trying to do here and I like it. Give more definition to the back of the body because from the light source it would create a shine on his features.

I agree with chains. Also, create something for the viewer to look at first view, something that brings the piece together. Light reflecting off the eye maybe?

[JunkfoodMan]

Thanks for the crit, i'll work on that in a while.
Here's another one i've churned out in about 15-20 mins.



Keep in mind these are WIPs so please don't assume they're finished, but still give crit =D

[Chainsy]

I like the surreal glow, but the rocks look too blurry, an overall rule is that soft things have blurred edges, hard things hard well..hard edges and are alot more defined. Also the way the snow is placed makes it look unrealistic. For example, on the little cliffs where theres snow on the very edge of the cliffs, there should be build up of snow directly below the cliff on the ground. Your doing great though.

[Invader Veex]

Halo 3 syle dumpster.

[LlamaMaster]

The edges on that square sticking out from the side look worn down to much.

[Hunter]

[Chainsy]

[Hunter]

That looks pretty good. And Shiny

[Sever]

splazer

You already have your own thread for it. No need to post it here.