Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Geo]

This is a male character model underlay that I'm working on for the Source Engine.

Tri-count: About 2000

[DEElekgolo]

He is leaning forward too much and his arms need to move forward a bit.

[Geo]

I can agree with you on the arms, but the model isnt even fucking rigged. Leaning forward is nothing.

[LinkandKvel]

Not sure exactly what it's called, but the area behind his knee is too thin. Also are there any elbows?

[DEElekgolo]

It doesnt have to be rigged for it to look like its leaning forward.

[Geo]

Not sure exactly what it's called, but the area behind his knee is too thin. Also are there any elbows?

Omg haha. I didn't even notice that. I'll get on it. And like I said at halomaps DEE, it doesn't matter if hes leaning forward like that before he is rigged.

[ICEE]

I think I get what dee means. From the knee up, it looks curved outward. Rigging could fix it I suppose though..

[JunkfoodMan]

he looks too bulgy. his muscles/structure needs to be more subtle.

[Sel]

And an incredibly bad top view render to give a better idea of the layout I've setup here.



Also the cave doesnt go anywhere, and will probably lead to some forerunner room with a teleporter leading to somewhere else.

[paladin]

Looks good. I'd do a little more geometry in the cliffs but looks great.