Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[BobtheGreatII]

I'm going to be totally honest with you.

It doesn't look good.

Looks like you just slapped random shapes onto the Halo sniper rifle, and then put a turbosmooth modifier onto it.

Happens when you have no concept. And in all fairness, the halo sniper rifle isn't original at all... and yeah, it is turbosmoothed, but that's what I was practicing. And sheesh, it was only one day of work. Don't be so mean.

[DEElekgolo]

Yes, most of those sub divided details look like they where originally extrudes. Select one of the edges of the extrude, ring it, and connect it with 2 segments with pinch set at 90 so it can look less organic.
E:
psst
use this.

[BobtheGreatII]

Lol, Ok, all up for advice. It's all just practice.

Edit: What modifier is that?

[CSFLOYD]

Lol, Ok, all up for advice. It's all just practice.

Edit: What modifier is that?

The editable poly modifier just scroll down through the tools in the sidebar until you see the name "Subdivision Surface" and your common sense should guide you the rest of the way.

[Malloy]

Disasters help + me not being lazy = me modeling this:

*big image*

*big image*

Thanks Disaster.

Hey, that looks like the concept completely... its just looks ugly. Did you use any ingame references because that concept looks pretty basic, as if alot of improvisation was on the modellers behalf.



Looks pretty decent ingame, (obv low poly doi, but the actual shape looks less harsh than some of your edges)

[Llama Juice]

looks like the top of the gun in game is skinnier than the middle of it... yours is all flat.

I think that'd help it a lot.

[Joshflighter]

This will be the model, next is unwrapping and textureing (before that is lowering poly I think.. got to ask disaster, lmao)

[Malloy]

Yo, 1) why dont you try and learn how to do this process independantly 2) It looks alot better now and 3)Is the detail on the butt actually like that in the game coz if so that is fugly. (In the screenshot the detail looks smaller and more eye friendly)

[Disaster]

Yo, 1) why dont you try and learn how to do this process independantly 2) It looks alot better now and 3)Is the detail on the butt actually like that in the game coz if so that is fugly. (In the screenshot the detail looks smaller and more eye friendly)

What he is really trying to do though is go from concept to production instead of trying to make a perfect remake. Also, I'm helping him, whats wrong with that? Learning independently doesn't make a difference than learning with some help.

[Malloy]

I wasn't discriminating anything on your behalf its just if he is self driven he'll accomplish much more instead of keep referring to you for help.