Great! Keep it as is!
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[WIP] - Star Fell Poster {UPDATED}
Hey everyone,
I'm currently working on a pretty big CG/Machinima hybrid project called Star Fell for machinima.com and while taking a break fromplaying borderlandsmaking the video i've made a Poster.
This is its current version:
This is the older version:
You can see all previous version that finally lead to this version after alot of discussions and mixing things up.
Version 1:
Version 2:
Version 3:
Just looking for some comments and crit. Thanks.
Last edited by FireDragon04; October 27th, 2009 at 08:40 AM.
the text + font is ugly
I can't change the font as it was the chosen font for the title in the intro sequence which is already done and 'in the bag'. Only working with what i have so.Originally Posted by Ganon
That font really needs to go. The pieces of debris should reflect the sun on some of their surfaces. You need a range of debris sizes too. Also, the edges of the ship should have bloom where they meet the sun.
how hard is it to go back and change it
I like the Version 1 "split" font, maybe combine that with what you have now?
Not impossibly difficult. Would be easier if people could maybe... suggest a better font?
Yea i liked that style of font..etc too, but that's when i got told i've got to be using the same as the in vid font. But i 'could' go back and change that now i think about it.
I might be helping him with this, all depends if he deems me worthy.
http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=...e=m&classt=pop
could probably find something more fitting in that category (sci-fi)
I think a thin font like this would suit it better, but maybe not with such narrow characters and being so obviously the aliens font.
EDIT: I'm the only one who has commented on something other than the font so far, let's help him out in other ways too.
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