Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Llama Juice]

Been playing with this scene a bit again lately. Still gotta add more to it and fix up the windows on everything lol.

Also, the weird box in the top left corner in the 3rd image is fixed. apparently if you look through a decal volume it does that... and I never told the skybox to not accept decals... even though it wasn't IN the volume... it still made weird artifacts. Turned off accept decals and it fixed it.

Also fun fact... you can't apply a decal to a model that has a BLEND_Translucent material applied to it. You can use BLEND_Masked, but not Translucent.

[Con]

git some parallax on those bricks mister!

[ICEE]

Whoah llama that looks pretty cool. What is it?

[neuro]

still the terrible window-outlines.

fix thoooose! they're a real eyesore in an otherwise good looking scene.

[FreedomFighter7]

Go ahead, fucking ignore my posts, IDC.

[=sw=warlord]

Hey Llama, i've worked a bit more on the scratching and differentiating, im wondering wherther i should leave the colour arrangement ive got for the top half or invert it, as at the moment i've got the plateing with the lighter metals from scratching at the edges and darker metals in the middle.
I think what i've got now is a pretty good step forward to what i should aim for.

[ExAm]

You're doing a good job at making the top plates look like pieces of torn construction paper tacked on, if that's what you're going for.

[=sw=warlord]

You're doing a good job at making the top plates look like pieces of torn construction paper tacked on, if that's what you're going for.

I was originaly going to go for a cast metal kind of finish, the kind you see on hammers, very strong and very tough, but after a few people suggested it i added some scratching to the plates and that's what i got.

[n00ber]

http://www.game-artist.net/forums/vb...e&articleid=22

[Hunter]

I was originaly going to go for a cast metal kind of finish, the kind you see on hammers, very strong and very tough, but after a few people suggested it i added some scratching to the plates and that's what i got.

I think you failed to see the sarcasm.

The texture is too blurry. And edges would also not look like that... Seeming as the whole top part is fully metal and not painted or another material with metal coating.

Add proper scratches, not loads of them either, people always go over the top with scratches.

I can't texture for shit, so ignore my crit if you like. Just telling you what I think